Thursday, August 11, 2011

How About this for a Plot?

It has the potential to be a good story and I can easily picture it as a movie in my head but you have too many ideas going on at once. If this was turned into a book it would be the size of an encyclopedia and if it were a movie it would be 5 hours long. You need to condense some of the conflicts. One big conflict is enough to keep an story flowing, more than one will confuse your audience and leave them unsatisfied.

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